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(As a side note, this is my first entry. It's a sad poem, I think, but I worry about it making any sense. Please comment and tell me what you think.)

First comes feeling
Heightened in the awareness of the Pressure
The fear growing
My mind going at too fast a pace
Ready to derail, the bolts are already popping

Forced to take a stand
Or lose all that I am
But still lost anyway
Cold stone, unforgiving
Worn smooth but still strong
It has been there since the beginning
Grinding grain into dust
How can I ever withstand?

Tears fall like steady rain
Are you sorry you do this to me?
Or are those my tears?
All is lost now
No hope left
No strength
No voice

I crumble under the pressure
My mind breaks like dry clay
My voice cracks like broken glass
Nothing left but dust
I am no longer who I am

Under the grindstone
I turn to dust
I crumble away
I am too weak
I cannot stand

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Koritai
A tempermental artist.
Artist | Hobbyist | Traditional Art
United States
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pentharis Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Happy Birthday, luv. c:
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Koritai Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, sorry I didn't see it before. Thanks and happy belated birthday to you.
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pentharis Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Thankye!
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ittybittynidhi Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
hiya! thanks for the fave ^_^
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zZDarkAngelZz Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011
hey!
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